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The Phantoms Revenge My favorite rollercoaster is The Phantoms Revenge. After a long cold winter it is always nice to enjoy the shinning sun on a nice summer day at a theme park. Kennywood is the place to go to ride The Phantoms Revenge.

The Phantoms Revenge is usually the first ride we ride to start our day at Kennywood. First we all get out of the car and strech and make sure that we all have our sunscreen on and everything we need for the day. As we walk into the park everyone is so excited. They are all in a long line waiting to get stamped to enter the park. When we get stamped we all decide who will ride with who and we head to the line for The Phantoms revenge, Our first ride of the day!

As we are standing in line we watch the rollercoaster go up the huge hill and listen to the people scream and shout in excitment. Many people are walking around and enjoying a good time with their families and friends. While in line we are talking about what ride we want to go on next and looking at the huge map. The map has each roller coaster listed and we turned to the page about The Pantoms Revenge. It gave us a Bio on what the rollercoaster was about and when it was built.

Soon enough it is almost our turn to get on. We are all so excited! People are trading places and trying to get in the line for the front cart. Our group all got to get on the coaster at the same time. I got lucy enough to get the front cart! We all get in and fasten our seat belts. The workers locked us in, and we started to climb up the hill.

Now as we are climbling up the hill i start to feel the butterflies flying quickly around in my stomache. I tried to get it off my mind that there was a huge hill coming up that we were about to drop down. When we arrived at thbe top of the hill you could see the whole theme park and the people walking looked like little ants. The coaster moved a little bit more and soon enough we were going down.

During the ride it was very exciting and it all happened so fast. There were so many steep hills, and bumps. When the ride was over i had the brightest smile on my fast and so did my little brother. We were glad that we chose The Phantoms Revenge as our first ride of the day. I also had a wonderful time the rest of the day at the theme park. The Phantoms Revenge My favorite rollercoaster is The Phantoms Revenge. After a long cold winter it is always nice to enjoy the shinning sun on a nice summer day at a theme park. Kennywood is the place to go to ride The Phantoms Revenge.

The Phantoms Revenge is usually the first ride we ride to start our day at Kennywood. First we all get out of the car and strech and make sure that we all have our sunscreen on and everything we need for the day. As we walk into the park everyone is so excited. They are all in a long line waiting to get stamped to enter the park. When we get stamped we all decide who will ride with who and we head to the line for The Phantoms revenge, Our first ride of the day!

As we are standing in line we watch the rollercoaster go up the huge hill and listen to the people scream and shout in excitment. Many people are walking around and enjoying a good time with their families and friends. While in line we are talking about what ride we want to go on next and looking at the huge map. The map has each roller coaster listed and we turned to the page about The Pantoms Revenge. It gave us a Bio on what the rollercoaster was about and when it was built.

Soon enough it is almost our turn to get on. We are all so excited! People are trading places and trying to get in the line for the front cart. Our group all got to get on the coaster at the same time. I got lucy enough to get the front cart! We all get in and fasten our seat belts. The workers locked us in, and we started to climb up the hill.

Now as we are climbling up the hill i start to feel the butterflies flying quickly around in my stomache. I tried to get it off my mind that there was a huge hill coming up that we were about to drop down. When we arrived at thbe top of the hill you could see the whole theme park and the people walking looked like little ants. The coaster moved a little bit more and soon enough we were going down.

During the ride it was very exciting and it all happened so fast. There were so many steep hills, and bumps. When the ride was over i had the brightest smile on my fast and so did my little brother. We were glad that we chose The Phantoms Revenge as our first ride of the day. I also had a wonderful time the rest of the day at the theme park.

Mrs. Fluharty: Great descriptive writing, could have focused the essay more on one topic, example the last roller coaster.