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My Trip To Myrtle Beach
When I went to Myrtle Beach I had alot of fun.Myrtle Beach is a perfect place for a vacation.

The day before we went to Myrtle Beach I had to pack my clothes.The next morning we had to wake up at 3:30 to leave.I was so excited that i couldn't wait till we got there.I could picture the beach and and all the people, swimming,playing frisbee,and surfing.

When we arrived at the hotel it was so hot that i started to sweat as soon as I steped out of the car.Then we unpacked and whent down to the beach.You could feel the hot sand in between your toes.You could see everyone playing in the water. You could hear the ocean and the dolphins.

Then we had to leave the next week.I didnt want to leave but we had to.I was goin to come back again sometime. On the ride home we all were talking about our experinces and how much we loved the beach.We also talked about some of the rides that we rode on the board walk like the bunge jump.

It was the best vacation I ever whent on.We look forward to coming back

Mrs. Fluharty: You could hear and see dolphins!! That is amazing! Good descriptive language in the middle of the Essay. The Intro. and Conclu. are very important para., remember a paragarph is at least 3 sentences. Good Job!